damn bro you've come so far since you started!
damn bro you've come so far since you started!
Thank you :D
that intro is dark I love it! That build is absolutely insane as well, but I feel the drop is a little disappointing. The kick isn't loud enough and the lead could be bigger.
Thanks for the feedback :)
I swear to god if you're 12 and at this level of prouduction already
lmao thanks xx
sick future house bro. Hard to find any of them on newgrounds to be honest but this slaps. One criticism is the chord progression in the drop. Only having two different chords really does make it sound boring and gets a bit annoying to listen to after a while. If you went with a 4 chord progression you can keep the listener interested because everything else about this is amazing.
thanks, this song has 4 different chords and not 2 xd, but you are right about the repetitiveness of the chords since i used 2 of them a lot
I appreciate the title.
Nice ambient intro. The distortion works well there. You could maybe extend that intro? The main guitar riff is overpowering everything else, so potentially turn that down. at around 0:53, it's hard to follow the rhythm of the power chords. Really REALLY nice variation in your drum patterns btw. At 1:36, maybe don't just drop everything instantly, put a snare in at the start of that phrase to make the transition smoother. Really neat metal track tho, it's obvious you've put a lot of effort in. Keep it up!
-Khora
Thank you! All good stuff to take into consideration for next time.
Beautiful intro. At 0:28 it sounds kind of cluttered, though it has a nice atmosphere. Sounds like the guitary sound has too much reverb. Your snare's fundamental is very VERY bassy, and It's messing with your actual bass. The vocal chops are nice, you've generated a cool mood alltogether. The saws at 0:54, try Sidechaining rather than just using an LFO automation on the volume. It could work maybe a bit better but they sound nice regardless. Pretty cool song alltogether though bro.
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